Major project I / Task 03: Concept Presentation

17/03/25 - 23/03/25 (Week 06 - Week 07)

Isabel Tan Xen Wern / 0355602 / Bachelor(hons) in creative media / Taylors University

Major Project I / PRJ64904

Task 03: Design Concept Presentation


JUMP-LINK

Introduction

Progression

Figure 1.1
Instructions (05/02/25)

Animatics Progression

Figure 1.2
Clip 1 (20/03/25)


Figure 1.3
Clip 2 (20/03/25)

Figure 1.4
Clip 3 (20/03/25)

Figure 1.5
Clip 4 (20/03/25)

Figure 1.6
Clip 5 (20/03/25)

Figure 1.7
Clip 6 (20/03/25)

  • I used Flipaclip to draw out these animations, following very roughly how the timing might be currently.
  • I then used Premiere Pro to combine these clips to create the animatic.
  • I sped up the timing slightly in premiere pro as I found that it went to slow.


Feedback From Sir:
  1. story is there but connection of emotion is not there
  2. blending 2d 3d stopmotion aniamtion - korean aniamtion early 2000s / flow and the making of the animation
  3. storyline is there but still flat - show emotion, subtle but not so direct portray of action / hinting + metaphors
  4. no depth, position of chracters, ex frame 1
  5. vanishing point and perspective is solid
  6. ex. something dropping and starts to get blurry = faints / transitioning into xxxx
  7. a certain sound/light/action/anything that reollects/trigger the trauma
  8. mixing up shots to build up the story
  9. include the title in the animation (start/end)
  10. anything that triggers/recollects his fear, even small things like smoking, light flickerings, stove etc
  11. depth of field, motion blur, etc
  12. composition, setups -> final ending climax ****


FINAL SUBMISSION


Figure 1.8
Final Slide submission(21/03/25)



REFLECTION


Making the animatics was a lengthy process and I had to really visualize how the entire animation would be and how it would transition as well. The timing was the most difficult part but I think I could do better in terms of timing. based on sir's feedback which helped us tremendously, I could make further improvements and learn new ways to create the animation to make the final product the best I could ever create. I think for the animatics, I could have added new ways to make the transitions and sir has taught me many ways in class that I cant wait to try out in the animation.








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